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You kiss me so gently
As if not to rupture
An innocence that's not there.
Your fingertips glide so smoothly
Over my unconcealed skin
Knowing all fragments of me.
Let me see the stock
Of all the dirty secrets of me
Hidden in the back of your mind.
Be not so gentle
For my innocence has already been crushed
And I want your vulnerable body
Pressing into me vividly.
Be not afraid of breaking me
For I am anything but porcelain.
©2005-2009 ~TearsOfTorment
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Submitted: August 1, 2005
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I was unsure of which category to put this under, but I finally chose erotic, simply because, I was in an erotic mood when I wrote it. I may move it to scraps eventually.
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an interesting piece. I like how youre making it clear that this person can have you, that youre tougher than they think.

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skinfidelity
Exactly. Thank-you for your comments. :heart:

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:smooch: Love never wanted me but I took it anyway. :rose: :heart:
dont scrap it. you cant. its too good for scraps. its really emotional and powerful. =)
Thank-you. :) :heart:

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:smooch: Love never wanted me but I took it anyway. :rose: :heart:
Yeah, this is definitely too good for scraps! It's a beautiful piece, display of quiet strength, it's nice!

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Thank-you :)

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:smooch: Love never wanted me but I took it anyway. :rose: :heart:
I like the use of the word "vividly", ive never seen it used for something non-visual.
Thank-you, I haven't either, but I decided to do so.

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:smooch: Love never wanted me but I took it anyway. :rose: :heart:
Great piece, I like the mood of it. And surprisingly on topic with a recent MSN conversaton. :)

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